2111.04704
Data-driven Set-based Estimation of Polynomial Systems with Application to SIR Epidemics
Amr Alanwar, Muhammad Umar B. Niazi, Karl H. Johansson
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- Sep 28, 2025, 12:56 AM
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The paper’s Proposition 2 claims that M_Θp = (M^+_{X|Z} − M_w) Ω(Z_{x|z}, U^−)† contains all matrices Θp consistent with the data, but it neither assumes nor proves a full-row-rank (persistency of excitation) condition for the monomial data matrix Ω. Without rank(Ω)=m_a, right-multiplication by a pseudoinverse only recovers the minimum-norm solution; the general solution includes an extra additive nullspace term Y(I−ΩΩ†). The paper’s proof sketch does not address this and relies on a terse substitution using an interval pseudoinverse, leaving a logical gap. By contrast, the candidate solution is correct: it derives the same inclusion and explicitly states the needed rank condition for exactness, while noting that without it the displayed set captures only the minimum-norm Θp. See the paper’s setup of f_p(ζ)=Θ_p h(ζ) and data model (3)–(5) , the construction of Zx|z(k) in Lemma 1 (6) from z(k)=Hx(k)+γ(k) , the stacked bound M^+_{X|Z} in Proposition 1 (8) , the interval/pseudoinverse conventions , and Proposition 2 (9) with its brief proof sketch and “contains all matrices” phrasing .
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\textbf{Recommendation:} major revisions
\textbf{Journal Tier:} specialist/solid
\textbf{Justification:}
The proposed framework is valuable and well-motivated, with correct and useful constructions for mapping outputs to state zonotopes and stacking them into matrix zonotopes. However, the core offline identification bound (Proposition 2) is overstated: without a stated rank (informativity) condition on the lifted data matrix, the result cannot guarantee containment of all consistent coefficient matrices. The proof sketch is too terse and omits this crucial point. Addressing this gap (by adding assumptions or refining the statement) will substantially improve correctness.