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2105.04353

ON THE SUM OF CHEMICAL REACTIONS

Linard Hoessly, Carsten Wiuf, Panqiu Xia

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Sep 28, 2025, 12:56 AM

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Part (i) of the candidate solution is fine: since R*_{U,F} ⊆ R by construction (Definition 4.1), we have cl(R*_{U,F}) ⊆ cl(R), and Lemma 3.3 then immediately yields that any transition achievable via the reduced network is achievable via the original network, exactly as the paper states for Theorem 5.6(i) . However, the candidate’s proof of (ii) is flawed. It (implicitly) conflates elements of cl(R) with members of R and identifies an arbitrary witness (y, y′) ∈ cl(R) with an element of R0 so as to conclude (y, y′) ∈ cl(R*_{U,F}). This ignores the paper’s careful distinction between the original reaction set and its closure, and between R0 defined on R versus the closure-level no-U set. The paper’s proof of Theorem 5.6(ii) instead relies on a nontrivial re-ordering argument via Lemma 4.6 to compress U-cascades, and it emphasizes that the ‘intermediate species’ assumption (together with F = RU) is essential . Indeed, the authors give a concrete counterexample showing that (ii) fails even for non-interacting (but not intermediate) species—S1 leads to S5 in R but not via R*—which contradicts the candidate’s general claim . In short, the paper is correct and complete; the model overgeneralizes and misuses the closure characterization (Lemma 3.3) .

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\textbf{Recommendation:} minor revisions

\textbf{Journal Tier:} specialist/solid

\textbf{Justification:}

The manuscript develops a clean sum calculus for reactions and leverages it to unify reachability characterizations and graph-based reductions. The closure-based perspective (Lemma 3.3) is insightful and used effectively to prove properties such as Theorem 5.6, where the interplay between structural hypotheses (intermediate species, F = RU) and reachability is made precise. The work is correct and thoughtfully illustrated with counterexamples that delineate the limits of the results. Some notational points (e.g., careful separation of R vs. cl(R) in reduction sections) could be clarified for readers. The necessity of the assumptions in Theorem 5.6(ii) is clearly exhibited by the counterexample, which also pinpoints where shortcuts like the candidate’s proof fail.