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2012.13869

Neural Closure Models for Dynamical Systems

Abhinav Gupta, Pierre F.J. Lermusiaux

incompletemedium confidence
Category
math.DS
Journal tier
Strong Field
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Sep 28, 2025, 12:55 AM

Audit review

For the discrete-delay case, the paper’s adjoint DDE and gradient match the model’s derivation (advanced-in-backward-time adjoint with delta-sampled loss producing jumps; gradient d_θL = −∫ λ^T ∂_θ fRNN dt), see the stated adjoint (Eq. 14) and gradient formulas (Eqs. 7–8 in the supplement; and main text) which align with the model’s steps . For the distributed-delay (coupled) case, the coupled adjoint system (Eq. 19) also matches the model, including α = μ(0) from the y-variation boundary term . However, the paper’s stated gradient with respect to φ is incomplete: it omits the contribution from the φ-dependence of the initial condition y(0) = ∫_{−τ2}^{−τ1} gNN(h(t); φ) dt appearing in the Lagrangian via α, which yields an extra term −α^T ∫_{−τ2}^{−τ1} ∂_φ gNN(h(t); φ) dt with α = μ(0). The model includes this missing history-correction term explicitly and is therefore correct and strictly more complete for d_φL . As a secondary note, the paper repeatedly refers to δ(t) as the Kronecker delta in continuous time (should be Dirac), and it posits distribution-valued multipliers (e.g., μ = λ δ) that are unnecessary given the fixed, parameter-independent history; these do not alter the main results but obscure the logic .

Referee report (LaTeX)

\textbf{Recommendation:} minor revisions

\textbf{Journal Tier:} strong field

\textbf{Justification:}

The manuscript’s adjoint derivations for discrete and distributed neural DDEs are largely correct and useful. The coupled adjoint system is right, and the discrete-delay case is handled cleanly. The only substantive issue is that the published gradient with respect to the distributed-delay parameters φ omits the history-dependent term induced by y(0)’s φ-dependence; this is easy to fix. Clarifying the delta terminology and avoiding unnecessary distribution-valued multipliers would improve readability.